Mint's request-chapter 6

Mint, known in the forums as Whisper now, wanted me to illustrate chapter 6 in his story. I tried to follow his specifications as much as I could. This was my first time doing a night scene, and it was my first time using a full illumination effect. I know some of the perspectives are off, but I work on most of my home drawings at night, because it's nighttime when I finish all my homework...